Not bad, but try different things
Like the last guy said it had alot of the same things (the face changing, the wave eating the words and the 2 eyes joining) it would be better if you did a sort of story or even random things, but different. And maybe speed up the frames per second, alot of people said that to me when i made my fbf flash, so give it another go with the constructive critisism you get and you'll get a better score for sure.
understandable. i took that into mind, thanks for the review.
Pants.
the least you could have done could have been to tween te guy!
I dont believe in tweening.
Unless I'm in the mood for it.
Pretty cool, very random!
Ok, now that sure was random, but it was pretty good. You have talent drawing, because all the drawings are good, you should just make a good movie with them drawings like a short comedy or something you know. Not just all random. But it still was cool, i especially liked the end bit with the city and how it went underground, that looked pretty professional! Good job, keep it up.
The Hitler thing was actually going to be a cartoon in it's own right. Now you mention, I should probably work on that again.
Anyway, the city bit, if I remember right, is the only Pen-tool-drawn bit in the whole movie. Professional indeed.
Nyeah.
Thanks for the comments.
Not bad sprite work.
I thought it was pretty good. I saw number one yesterday and thought it wasn´t too bad. Sure, like you said it´s not following any sort of story, but it´s pretty good. The sprites are simple, but work together perfect. The only things i would criticise, and not that much, are, you made the flash too small for your document, if you know what i mean. at one point when fighter jumps out the screen, you see half of him stuck at the side.....and the last thing is that it wsa pretty short. But overall not bad. Keep it up!
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Meh.
Don´t take this the wrong way, i´m not slagging you of, but it was pretty pants. Cloud looked like he was just traced, and like the last reviewer said it took too long in some bits, i mean, cloud walking down the corridor for 30 seconds, we only need to see maybe 5 seconds of that, we get that he´s walking down a corridor. I know how it feels that people tell you your movie is shit, but think of it as constuctive criticism. It´s like my movie, i got the same thing, same sort of story too, but hey, keep it up, part 2 might be better, i´ll watch it and review if i can! Seeya.
yes he was redrawn but the faces were done by me. be sure to see part 2 cause u will prolly like it. however i do disagree with the hallway scene. i felt that it was perfect. read what cloud is thinking it'll get ur mind off the animation and waiting for the next scene. thanks.
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