Nice Collab.
I think it turned out pretty nice. Alot of the parts were very well done, but even though you said you have chosen the parts better this time for an overall better quality, i think there was still 1 or 2 parts that could have been alot better. The majority of it was all pretty good, faced paced and action packed! I especially liked RavenRonalds part because of the artistic quality put into it, a nice change to alot of it which was alot of flying stick things, even though they were well done. So, overall i say it´s a very good collab, well done and put together, thumbs up from me, and congraulations.
P.s: I think when you do collabs, everyones user name should be in the same corner while their parts are playing....it looked a bit..odd to see names dissapear and appear in another corner.