Score: 10

"Great work."

submission: Apples.

date: May 29, 2008

I really liked this little movie. You set a really nice atmosphere with the whole thing; The colours, the backgrounds, the characters and the music all worked perfect together.

Everything in this flash seemed to be perfect, for instance, one thing i noticed, even though it´s only on screen about 2 seconds, are the wheels of the truck. The idea that you used of just spinning the middle bit worked perfect, and it´s little things like that, that make this flash awesome.

The characters are funny little guys, and very original, so you get to like them right away.

Not much i can criticize on this flash because it was all REALLY GOOD. I´d like to see more of your stuff. Keep it up man :)

Score: 10

"Top Notch"

submission: Deep Sexy Space

date: May 29, 2008

It´s not every day that Newgrounds gets a great submission like this, so i´m glad i caught it before it gets on the Front page, because it should make it on there.

The animation was very slick and smooth. The art is great, you have a nice style and got the female anatomy pretty damn good :)

I didn´t like the song alot personally, but it does go with the flash perfectly.

Very good work, keep at ´em. Looking forward to seeing more :)

Score: 3

"Needs more..."

submission: Tracing Tutorial(Helpful)

date: May 28, 2008

This needs more for you to be able to call it a tutorial. All you´re done here is shown 3 or 4 steps on how to draw over an image.

honestly i don´t think anyone really needs a tracing tutorial, because it´s so straight forward. You don´t even have to do any of those steps you said, other that make a new layer.

You can trace any object alot quicker by just making a new layer over the image and drawing over it.

I don´t want to discourage you, because you´ve put some effort into it. So maybe next time you´re going to make something, maybe put some more time into it, and if it´s a tutorial, explain a bit more.

Score: 7

"Nice Game"

submission: Space Hockey 3D Airhockey

date: May 28, 2008

Well, this is a simple game that actually turned out good. I think the best part of the game is that you can change camera angle - a very good idea. The physics of both the put and the hand stick things were very good and realistic.

The fullscreen button didn´t work, but i´m guessing that´s because NG didn´t let it go fullscreen.

Score: 8

"Very well made."

submission: The Fox

date: May 28, 2008

I really enjoyed this flash, because you can tell that you put time and effort into it.

The drawings were very good, and you set a nice ambient to the whole thing. Apart from that, it went very well with the music.

It´s got a bit of a childish feel to it, but i suppose that´s ok, because it´s safe for all audiences.

The only thing i could say needs improvement on this flash is the speed. At times it could have been a bit faster. For example when the fox is chasing the duck and goose through the barn, they run very slow, but it´s not that important, just something to consider for your next work :D

Very good work. Keep it up!

Score: 6

"Nice concept"

submission: MouseMania DEMO

date: March 15, 2008

This has great potential.

You could make a nice game out of this if you have some time. You said you was looking for suggestions, so here goes. Maybe make a game with levels that you have to destory a certain amount of balls in a certain time (100 balls in 5 seconds for example), and then as you progress there can be different colour balls, and you can only destroy a certain colour for points while other colours deduct points maybe.

Anyway, good idea, and good luck with the project, hope to see more soon.

Score: 10

"Another amazing episode"

submission: Primal War 16

date: March 15, 2008

This is one of the best and longest running series on NG. I don´t know how you keep churning this amazing episode out every time, but they are great. One of my favourite series on NG.

The music, sound effects, and amazing backgrounds make it feel like a feature film, which is a great achievement - atmosphere is very important, and you make the viewer feel as if he´s there.

The only things i can criticise in the slightest, would be that the animations of the characters can be a little sloppy at times, but it´s not that big a deal. And that, there is no ´so far in the story´ sort of thing where it tells you what has happened up untill now. Because alot of people will watch this one for this first time, and if they havn´t seen the first 15 they won´t have a clue as to what the story is.

Score: 7

"Impressive"

submission: Hidden Power Ep1

date: January 12, 2008

Nice work. Though you don´t have the best art in the world, i can see you put alot of hardwork and effort into this flash, and it´s payed of. It´s a work well done even though not alot is explained about how this man has his special power.

You make good effects with the blur filter, and it adds a nice touch to your flash, but be careful when combining penicl and brush lines. The flash was mostly all brush lines, but the plane for example looks like it was made with line tool, and then when it´s broken in the middle, the explosion and damage on the plane is brush lines, and it´s alot bolder and the two sort of contrast.

But other than that, very good job :D

Score: 3

"Nice art but..."

submission: Cute whale

date: January 12, 2008

You have a nice art style, and i liked how the stream of water came out the blow hole and went away, but this is a simple 2 second loop. Try to make an animation, even if it´s a short, like 30 seconds. There are alot of good shorts on NG that don´t take a long time to make, and you have good art so you could do one. Good luck.

Score: 10

"Amazing!"

submission: Come Clarity Collab

date: December 20, 2007

I´m a huge fan of In Flames, and when i saw ´Come Clarity´ I was shocked to see a collab for an In Flames track, because they´re greatly known. This isn´t my favourite In Flames song, but it´s still good, and has a nice theme for a flash.

As for the animation, i was impressed. I was shocked that there was an In Flames collab, but even more shocked when i saw the work that had gone into it. Most of it was great, some i would even call perfect. There were a few different styles of animation, some better than others, but they were all above average.

To sum it up - great job guys. This is a collab worthy of it´s score, and in my opinion, front page material! Going into my favourites :D